Tuesday, 12 June 2018

Interpreting Poems

Interpreting Poems
In each of the poems below an object is being described as if it were alive.
Next to each poem, write down the ways in which the object is described to make it seem as if it is alive. The first one has been done as an example.

Tulip Sunday
In the Botanical Gardens
bright tulips
spread out
like a yellow tablecloth
on a table with thousands of legs.
Some tulips
have red lips
and dark black eyes.
They bow and curtsy
in the wind.
By Laura Ranger
Rags
The night wind
rips a cloud sheet
into rags,
then rubs, rubs
the October moon
until it shines
like a brass doorknob.
By Judith Thurman
Paperclips
A jumbled sight,
The sheets I write –
High time for paperclips
To take a bite
And clasp them tight
Between bright bulldog lips!
By X. J. Kennedy

Lawnmower
The lawnmower
Grinds its teeth
Over the grass,
Spitting out a thick
Green spray;
Its head is too full
Of iron and oil
To know
What it throws
Away:
The lawn's whole
Crop of chopped
Soft,
Delicious
Green hay.
By Valerie Worth
Sun
The sun
Is a leaping fire
Too hot
To go near,
But it will still
Lie down
In warm yellow squares
On the floor
Like a flat
Quilt, where
The cat can curl
And purr.
By Valerie Worth



The tulips in this poem seem alive because they:
  • have red lips
  • have eyes
  • bow`
  • curtsy







  • The wind in this poem seems alive because it:
    • Shines
  • Doorknob
  • rags
  • rubs





  • The paperclips in this poem seem alive because they:
    • They Bite
  • Bright
  • Jumbled sight
  • bulldogs lips



  • The lawnmower in this poem seems alive because it:

    • Grinds its teeth
  • Full of iron
  • oil
  • Green spray










  • The sun in this poem seems alive because it:
    • Leaping fire
  • Warm Yellow Squares
  • Flat Quilt
  • And a cat




  • Monday, 11 June 2018

    Matariki Day

    Walt: to structure a recount.


    When we were at school on thursday we had to pick what kind of thing we wanted to do there was sport, baking, movie making, craft because we had to celebrate matariki day. I picked sports but on the day I got picked for movie making because there was had 30 picked for sports.

    I went to my class it was in creative space I had Sione, Julius, Paschal, we all walked together to creative space Paschal and Julius was complaining because they wanted to do sports when but when we went in miss
    Lagitupu told us to sit down. She said the roll and when she finished she told us to look for a song but she said you can picked one of these songs or chose your own one we picked one of Miss Lagitupu songs.
    My group Sione, Julius, Ben and me we went onto the computer so we can listen to the song and check what were doing in the film. So the big Ben he got the ideas for us he had some funny ones but Paschal he didn't like it because he wanted to do rugby so we went with Paschal because we like rugby so we all agreed with Paschal so we waited for Miss Lagitupu and had some free time.


    When Miss Lagitupu arrived but she told us what have we planned so we said to her that were going to play on the feld with a rugby ball she said ok and we said were only going to get one try and then dance hard out. So when we went outside we were trying to turn on the camera and we practise and then we saw that the camera had only had 41 minutes left before it turns off.


    So when we were ready we got into our positions and waited for him to kick the ball when he kicked the ball sione catch the ball sione was super fast that he a try then the other team kicked the ball aging I got the ball this stepped one of them but then Tj tackled me I passed it to sione and then he ran he got tackled by Tj again then he passed the ball to me and I got a runaway I got the try and gave sione the kick he kicked it he got it in.


    We started dancing on the courts and the middle of the feld and we even danced in the classes but the camera was nearly dead so we went straight back to the creative space we said to her that were finished she said who’s editing it I said that i'm doing it she put all the videos on imovie I deleted all the bad parts and turn the noise off so they can hear the song.

    Monday, 4 June 2018

    Little Red Ridding Hood

    Someone was speaking really angry little red riding hood put the phone down. Then he started to rain lighten hit the tree outside the tree turn on fire then the bad wolf the dad acted like a person saying i'm cold and you open the door but the voice sounded really angry so little red riding hood went to look out the window she saw the wolf but the wolf didn't she her she didn't say anything she acted like there was no one home but the wolf already known that they were in there they stayed until the phone ringed she answered it it was mum she said when are you coming home little red riding hood said there’s a big bad wolf mum said i'm coming over mum putted on her raincoat and she started running when she got there she saw the big bad wolf. The wolf smelled One beautiful day there was a little girl called little red riding hood when she was playing outside her mum said little riding come inside little red riding hood she come inside. She said to her take this cake and cookies to her grandma because she’s feeling sick little riding hood cruising down the forest and when she was cruising she saw a wolf the wolf said to her where you going little riding hood said i'm going to my grandma’s because she’s feeling sick the wolf said you should get some flowers for your grandma when she was picking them up the wolf went straight to grandma’s house he knocked on the door and said it’s me little riding hood.


    Grandma said the doors open when the door open she was super shocked she was freaked out the gobbled her down super fast. When little red riding hood finished she run super fast and when she got there the wolf said come in the doors open she said look a your ears there big and then she said your eyes are big then the wolf started to chase her and grandma turn ultra instinct in the wolf belly grandma killed the wolf when she was inside. When she was out she said thanks for giving me some food and cake then they were happy all after again.


    Then grandma started to feel real sick she went to bed and slept and they didn't know that the dad was stalking them too little riding hood looked after her she locked the door so no more wolves come in and then the phone started ringing little red riding hood went to answer. her and chased her mum was super fast the wolf could not catch her but. Until she was tired slowed down and took a break and then suddenly wolf jumped and gobbled her down mum was angry so she used her powers and killed the dad.




    Then they went into grandma’s house looked after her 5 days later she started to feel better they went outside to have some food then they all lived happily after a aging.



    THE END

    Sunday, 6 May 2018