Planning and writing For matariki

WALT recount a personal experience

Planning my recount

Title:

Orientation (Introduction)	Who?	Everone
	What?	Matariki
	When?	On Friday
	Where?	Room 16
What happened? Tell it in the order it happened.	First of all We Went to assembly then we went back to our class then got our labels and it said what class we are and our names then we went to the class that had class on our labels.
	Next  We ran there and then the teacher said hang your bag up in the hallway I put my bag next to Devontae.
	After that We Did the roll then we started drawing a kite but it hard draw one so we asked if we can get our chromebook.
	Later on We were at our real class getting our chromebooks then Mrs Buchanan opened the charge buddy then we got our chromebook then miss west told us to put it in a case then we we went back started drawing.
	In the end We used strings sticks to put on our kite and we colored our kites then we went to the hall and then we went to our real class and then sited and then Mr Burt told us to show our stuff that we made after that told the kapa haka people to come up and perform after that we went to to our real class
Reorientation (Summary)

Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:

First of all We Went to assembly then we went back to our class then got our labels and it said what class we are and our names then we went to the class that had class on our labels. Next  We ran there and then the teacher said hang your bag up in the hallway I put my bag next to Devontae. After that We Did the roll then we started drawing a kite but it hard draw one so we asked if we can get our chromebook. Later on We were at our real class getting our chromebooks then Mrs Buchanan opened the charge buddy then we got our chromebook then miss west told us to put it in a case then we we went back started drawing. In the end We used strings sticks to put on our kite and we colored our kites then we went to the hall and then we went to our real class and then sited and then Mr Burt told us to show our stuff that we made after that told the kapa haka people to come up and perform after that we went to to our real class.

I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
1	Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
2	Recounts the experience in the order the events happened.
3	Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
4	Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
5	Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.